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9-APR-2024 | Excerpt from “A Moveable Feast” by Ernest Hemingway

Excerpt from “A Moveable Feast” by Ernest Hemingway

A more long-winded excerpt. This sort of length allows for a mix of detailed narration and train-of-thought.

It was either six or eight flights up to the top floor and it was very cold and I knew how much it would cost for a bundle of small twigs, three wire-wrapped packets of short, half-pencil length pieces of split pine to catch fire from the twigs, and then the bundle of half-dried lengths of hard wood that I must buy to make a fire that would warm the room. So I went to the far side of the street to look up at the roof in the rain and see if any chimneys were going, and how the smoke blew. There was no smoke and I thought about how the chimney would be cold and might not draw and of the room possibly filling with smoke, and the fuel wasted, and the money gone with it, and I walked on in the rain.