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2-FEB-2024 | Another excerpt from “Brave New World” by Aldous Leonard Huxley

Another excerpt from “Brave New World” by Aldous Leonard Huxley

Complete ideas, not sentences.
Note the contrast in sentence length.
And how many words evoke motion: “busily unloading”, “moving staircase”, “escalator”, “conveyor traveling…”, “circuit.”

Three tiers of racks: ground floor level, first gallery, second gallery.

The spidery steel-work of gallery above gallery faded away in all directions into the dark. Near them three red ghosts were busily unloading demijohns from a moving staircase.

The escalator from the Social Predestination Room.

Each bottle could be placed on one of fifteen racks, each rack, though you couldn’t see it, was a conveyor traveling at the rate of thirty-three and a third centimetres an hour. Two hundred and sixty-seven days at eight metres a day. Two thousand one hundred and thirty-six metres in all. One circuit of the cellar at ground level, one on the first gallery, half on the second, and on the two hundred and sixty-seventh morning, daylight in the Decanting Room. Independent existence — so called.