• Copywork365
  • Posts
  • 4-AUG-2024 | Nike’s “Who said” Ad

4-AUG-2024 | Nike’s “Who said” Ad

Author

Dan Bogachek
August 04, 2024

Nike’s “Who said” Ad

Who said woman was not meant to fly.

The Women’s Nike Air Force III. It’s supportive. It’s comfortable. And it fits on a woman’s foot like no other basketball shoe. All because it’s designed specifically for a woman. More specifically, for a woman who has no fear of flying.

  • The hook turns a question into a statement — a challenge. Putting some ‘tude on that thang.

  • Short & punchy. Repetition in couplets.

  • Hook-punchline sandwich. You love to see it.

You glance at your watch.

It’s 6:28. You’ve been at it since 3.
Crap. Your hot date is at 7. Running late. Sink shower it is.
Nowhere close to done editing…

“…at least all the ideas are laid out, so there’s that. Did I miss anything? I don’t think so? Ok, but how do I make it flow? I need to get the final draft to Stacey for design asap, team cutoff is at noon Thursday…”

You’ve spent dinner completely distracted. Your date just took off. You go home exhausted, plod to your desk, and crack open the laptop.

Or… it could go like this:

5:41 — you’re out of the shower and lip-syncing.
6:17 — dressed to the nines and zenned out.
7:03 — the sunset glints off your aviators as you smile hello.
8:36 — it actually feels like you’re hitting it off. Not just hot, funny to boot.
Next morning, 10:27 — polished draft ready in your inbox.
10:31 — Stacey messages back, “thanks, looks good!”

The difference?

You had Copygloss handle it yesterday afternoon.

For help with editing, email Dan:
[email protected].